THE WALL
Life was tough behind the wall, there was not much food no music and no TV so we had to make our own fun. So i decided to investigate an old derelict building that was supposed to be haunted.
I entered using a back door as i didn't want to get caught and when i got in it was very dark and damp. I went up to the first floor to see what the bedrooms were like but as i went up a stair gave way under my foot an broke my leg, and it was stuck.How was i gonna get out of here? After a while i started to hear what sounded like moaning noises and a light started to flash dimly which was weird as there was no electricity, At that point i pulled my leg out of the stair as hard as i could and hopped as fast as i could out of the old house, i managed to hobble home where told my parents that i had fallen as i would had been in deep trouble if they knew what i been up to. I still believe that old house is haunted even though i have never been back. I still see the light flashing but now the wall has been taken down i can get away from that horrible place.
THE WALL (redraft)
Life was tough behind the wall , the year was 1979 and there was not much food, no music, no TV and not even school so we had to make our own fun.One day i got bored as none of my friends were paying outside so i decided to investigate an old derelict building that was supposed to be haunted.
I entered using a back door as i didn't want to get caught and when i got in it was very dark and damp. I went up to the first floor to see what the bedrooms were like but as i went up a stair gave way under my foot an broke my leg, and it was stuck.How was i gonna get out of here? After a while i started to hear what sounded like moaning noises and a light started to flash dimly which was weird as there was no electricity, At that point i pulled my leg out of the stair as hard as i could and hopped as fast as i could out of the old house, i managed to hobble home where told my parents that i had fallen as i would had been in deep trouble if they knew what i been up to. I still believe that old house is haunted even though i have never been back. I still see the light flashing but now the wall has been taken down i can get away from that horrible place. I've been waiting 36 years for this.










